I think that soccer is amazingly fun because there are lots of fun games that my friends and I get to play. I get to play with other teams not just my team. I get to travel. Traveling is fun because I get to go to Salt Lake City, Utah and Casper, Wyoming and other places. But the games aren't the only fun part of soccer.
It is fun at practice,too, because I get to play a soccer games against the coaches. If we lose, we have to do 10 crunches. If we win, we get to tell the coaches what we want them to do. Our favorite thing is to make them do butt letters. (It's funny, trust me.)
The best game ever happened when we were playing a game at Salt Lake City. It was two hours long. There were 50 minutes left in the first quarter. We had scored 2 goals and the other team had scored 3 goals. The ref blew the whistle and both teams went to the bench. My team was losing. My coach said, "Okay guys, if you work together, you can score and win."
"OK!" we cheered. "Let's do it!"
Our break was over, and we started playing. We played better than the first quarter. We played for a long time. Then we were down to the last 15 minutes.
I passed the ball to my friend, Juan and he shot. We scored. We were so happy that we stared to sprint all around the field. We ran and celebrated until the ref told us to start the game again. We were tied, and the ref blew the whistle and we started to play. We played until there only 5 minutes left. I had the ball and when I was about to shoot, I got tripped and the ref said it was a penalty. I put the ball on the line then I got ready. The ref blew the whistle and I started to run toward the ball. I shot it extremely hard.
"Goal!!!" screamed my coach. We were all excited! My team got the big gallon of water and poured it on my coach. Then the ref blow the whistle and called it a game.
It was really fun. We got a trophy and some metals. That was the best game I have ever played!!
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