Did you know that the White House is haunted?
In January of 2009 president Obama and his daughters Malia and Sasha moved in the White House. It was a bitterly cold day in Washington DC. The president and his daughters Malia and Sasha were exploring their new home, the White House. They were trying to take their bags out of the truck, and put them into their BIG house. The girls were helping by carrying boxes into their rooms; however, the movers were very fast. This gave them time to explore. While they were seeing their new home, they saw a lot of drawings hanging in the walls of the halls. They also saw plants and carpets.''Those carpets are beautiful''.Sasha said said. They felt so happy to be able to live in the White House. The girls were also a little scared to be actually in the White House. When they first were walking into the White House, Malia and Sasha could not believe their eyes.
The girls felt so excited because they would be choosing their rooms, decorating and painting them. They also felt excited because of the tennis court, basketball court, and swimming pool. They couldn't wait for Christmas because their dad told them that the first family gets to have a special party just for kids. While the president was helping his daughters organize their rooms, he told them that he was happy because there were five cooks who would be serving them their favorite meals and snacks whenever they were asked.
When Sasha and Malia finished decorating their rooms, they went to sit on a couch in a very fancy room. Then Malia had an idea, "Let's play hide and seek!" She was very excited.
"Yeah! That's a great game," Sasha replied.
Before they played, Malia wanted to tell Sasha a scary story. Malia started the scary story by saying, "The white house is haunted!”
Sasha shivered.
Malia continued, “When people visit the White House they often see somebody walking down the hall and they can also hear footsteps. ''The ghost is ... Malia paused. ''Abigail Adams." She said with a scary voice.
Sasha didn't believe her sister.
They started to play Hide and Seek, and Malia wanted to be the person who hid. Sasha agreed. As Sasha was looking for her sister, she heard footsteps coming from the stairs. She felt scared. She stopped and sat down in the hall, waiting for her sister to come out. She heard footsteps getting louder. She remembered her sister's story. Sasha frantically looked for her sister, but how would she find her in the 132 main rooms and the 35 bathrooms? Now Sasha was scared. "Malia, come out now!" she yelled. Malia did not appear. Terrified, she ran to her room and hid under her bed. When Malia came out, Sasha started to cry; she was really scared. Sasha could not speak.
"What happened?" Malia asked.
Sasha didn't feel like explaining. All she said was, "You scared me."
When Malia saw how scared her sister was, she felt sad. She couldn't believe her sister. "You are so dramatic?" Malia said with a really loud voice. She ran to her room and slammed the door. She was so nervous that her dad might get mad at her and ground her for the rest of the year. The only thing she thought of was that Sasha was going to get her in trouble.
Later that night, President Obama went to Malia's room. "What happened? Do you know what happened to your sister?" he asked concerned.
"Nothing. "Leave me alone! I don't want to see anyone right now!" She yelled. Instead of leaving, President Obama took Malia into Sasha's room. "Can someone please explain to me what happened?"
"I will daddy,'' Malia said in the hallway. Malia and President Obama went into Sasha's room.
"Thank you." Mr. Obama said gladly.
Malia sat down on Sasha's bed. "I told Sasha a scary story about Abigail Adams and she got a little scared. Then I asked her if we could play hide and seek. While we were playing, I wanted to see if she was really scared, so I started making footsteps. I think she really got scared because I had never seen her like this before. That's how all happened.'' Malia explained sadly.
"Where were you hiding while your sister was looking for you?'' Mr. Obama asked.
"I was in the closet on the top floor," Malia answered.
Sasha was relieved as that is where the sounds had come from! "It was you!" she said.
"I'm sorry!" Malia said sadly.
"OK! But, promise me you are never going to scare your sister again," the president warned Malia.
"I promise, Daddy," Malia said. They both hugged each other.
President Obama smiled and said, "Malia, I like how you have told me the truth. Now, I am going to give you and your sister a present." Mr Obama had a proud and happy smile on his face.
Malia and Sasha waited calmly, wondering what their present was going to be. Suddenly, a dog came running up the stairs. "A puppy!!" Malia screamed, really happy. They ran into Sasha's room and took the beautiful puppy with them. Sasha smiled. They both gave each other a big hug and knew they would never be scared again.... especially now that they had a dog to protect them!
~ By Cynthia
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your story was cool at the begging how you explain
ReplyDeletejosue m
I liked the description on your story good story.
ReplyDeletejose
wow i am impressed you made the characters real.
ReplyDeleteWow, I had a lot of connections. It's just like me and my sisters.
ReplyDeleteClaire A.
I like your story Danny Morales
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you weaved the facts in.
ReplyDeleteThe way you explained what happened and the description what happend was extrordinary.
Very strong conclusion.
*great story
ReplyDelete*Great plot
*awesome slick
Kameron
You use description very well and use very good diologue. And you spoke so we could all hear you too. (='.'=) (".") (-.-) (=.=)
ReplyDeleteBrady Anderson
your story was really cool and how you descriped it
ReplyDeletejosue m
your facts were true and the story was more up to date and you read slowly and clearly
ReplyDeleteI like you story so much. I like the feelings that you had in it. GREAT JOB!
ReplyDeleteYou had a great story. Good and Clear and loud and slow enough. Great Inflection.
ReplyDeleteColumbia
I likd how you had the sister try and scare her because i do that to my brother.
ReplyDelete~ Cassandra C.
I loved how you had the puppy helped them in the end and how the puppy will protect them!!! Great story and great reading!!!
ReplyDelete~Taylor
I liked you story and definition about the footsteps. I also I like it because it wasn't in the past where we can't have any connections. Liked it!!
ReplyDeleteStefani Cervantes
I liked how your story wasn't in the past it was in-the-now!
ReplyDeleteAnders
You made the characters seems so real. You had good inflection. Excellent Story!!!
ReplyDeleteScott Mclennan
good discription in the whole story
ReplyDeleteI liked how you changed your voice it let me understand the story more
Cameron
WOW!!!!! Cynthia great job with your story the thing I liked the most was that I could make lots of connection Great job.
ReplyDelete~Danicia.
I like your vocab. Despite you started coughing you kept on reading.
ReplyDeleteJulio
I like how it was really how she didn't speed up when she was nerveus roberto p.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your story!! you did a great job on your descriptions, it made me want to move to the White House!!!
ReplyDelete- Paul
i love how you potrayed the first family as something we can connect to!
ReplyDeleteYou mixed the truth and fiction amazingly, fantastic!
I love the ending
adam
your story was really good it was not really historical, but it was good.
ReplyDeleteI like your story because the form what you said is so cool and is so good or grad story because is about the White House and to about the President I like much your story is so important and more important about the president and The White House.
ReplyDeleteYou had real characters that made us connect to a lot of things. Great story.
ReplyDeleteClay
Your story was great! What I liked the most was that you made your story seem so real.
ReplyDeleteYour story gave me lots of connections like i got a puppy and Malia and Sasha got a puppy and I'm related to Abigail Adams.
ReplyDelete~Amelia
I had a lot of connections in this story because instead of you writing your story about something that not many people know about, and you made the story about something most of us know. You had good description and I really liked your story. Great job Cynthia!
ReplyDelete~Melissa
wow i really loved how you explained it.
ReplyDeleteJuan M.
I like how you make your characters real. you were slow and loud.
ReplyDelete~Yesica~
I liked how you had a sense of mystery.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you ended the story.
You kept on talking even though you started coughing
SChuyler
Great job researching and finding this fun fact about the White House! Your story is fun, and you characters are so real. You did an amazing job sharing - I'm impressed that your coughing didn't even stop you! You should send this to the White House!! I bet Mahlia and Sasha would think it is coolt that a student at JHMS wrote a story about them!
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