Sunday, May 31, 2009

D-Day ~by Anders

Waves crashed up against the boat. The boat softly rocked back and forth in the night. Loud sounds of other soldiers gambling and getting drunk kept me awake. Snoring kept me awake. I stayed up later and later checking my weapons and ammunition. Me, I don't know what I was thinking. Thoughts of what the day would hold swirled through my mind? Was I going to die today? No one knew.


General Eisenhower marched onto the ship. The troops were called to attention. "It's time to go," someone said to the general. He moved in front of the troops and cleared his throat. "Alright boys, the big wigs finally made up their minds. D-Day begins now! We will be part of the 82nd infantry division. The 82nd and we will be attacking Omaha Beach along with several other infantry divisions and a few tank divisions. Air support will take out panzer's and major bunkers before we land. Remember, look out for each other. I want as few of you as possible to die. Let's go."

The impact of his words were like a sledgehammer to the gullet. If we weren't scared before, we were now. Sarge led us towards our assigned position for the trip to Normandy.

Sarge, my entire regiment, and I were all scared to death as we loaded into the landing boat called a DUKW. These boats were amphibious 2 ½ ton vehicles that were both a truck and a boat. They usually usually carried supplies, but today they carried men, most to their deaths. Claustrophobia and death were racing through out our minds. Prayer was our only answer. I prayed to God to let me live, and I heard others doing the same. There was a buzzer, and it was time. It was time to rush from the boat and fight for our lives, fight for America, fight for freedom.

We were the first ship to arrive. I had no clue what to expect, what to do. I can hear the Germans firing. The bullets denting our DUKW. Suddenly the back dropped and bullets started to rain in. I was in the back of the ship, crammed into the little corner. My group and I were to scattered as we jumped out of the boat and into the water. Many soldiers never left the boat.

I jumped into the water. It was turning red. Bodies were floating in the water, lifeless. I felt like I was the last person alive. I was scared out of my wits. Despite my instincts, I swam toward shore, toward the bullets.
I ran onto the beach. Within moments, I felt something. I fell down, hurt. Clutching my hip, I saw my sarge drifting past me. Then just as quickly, he was dead. I knew I had to move away from the bloody water and death. With pain, fear, and anger in my eyes, I ran toward the Germans. Dodging bullets, I felt invincible. Finally, I dove into a bunker and found a moment of safety.


How did I get here, I thought. Why aren't my friends and Sarge protected like me? Guilt made me think I should be lying dead on the beach with them.


Starring at those angry Germans with my grenade in hand, I pulled the pin...........but it was too late.

By ~ Anders

18 comments:

  1. Great story Anders I liked that you were lowed and had great description.

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  2. you had a really good ending and you read clearly

    ruben

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  3. I liked your description in your story.

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  4. wow i am really impressed because you made the characters appear.

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  5. That was awsome!! You left a us with a cliff hanger. It was great.

    Scott

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  6. I liked you action and at the end how you said but it was to late. GOOG JOB!
    ~ Cassandra

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  7. I really liked the cliffhanger at the end of your story

    I liked how your charecter felt invinseble by anger

    Cameron

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  8. Your story had a really good plot. I also liked how you used repetition.
    ~Amelia

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  9. You had good repetition like fight for our lives, fight for freedom, fight for america. good slick and slice.

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  10. I liked how you explained the water and the dead bodies. Great job with thoughts and feelings!!!WOW!!!


    ~Taylor

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  11. I like how you described the characters feeling. I like how you read loud.

    Julio

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  12. You had an Amazing story!! You did SLICE really well. Good job with weaving the facts in your story.

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  13. Anders, Good story!!!!!!!!! I thought that it was interesting because you had GREAT vocab. NICE story!!!!!
    ~Danicia.

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  14. I really like your story. You describe thing really good. You use good vocabulary. GOOD STORY!

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  15. Great job Anders! You had great vocabulary and I really liked the part when you said that you should be laying dead on the beach with the other men, and that is how many people thought during the war and they wanted to die and it made your story so real. I also liked how you made it not as gorey as it really is and that is good so that your reader wont hurl with your awesome desription. Amazing story Anders!
    ~Melissa

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  16. I loved the end it was very interesting

    loved the way you weeved the facts in.

    loved the end ver strong and great description

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  17. your story is great anders the clifhanger is good


    tomi

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  18. Great recovery, Anders. You really used your research and the stories you read to help you write a fantastic piece. Please keep working on this story - as you learn more about D-day, you will be able to add more and more to this story. It deserves more of your time and attention. It will become something ever more powerful!

    Here are two amazing sites you should check out:
    http://www.army.mil/d-day/
    http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/amex/dday/

    Keep writing!!!

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